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Daddee I once was a slug.
Joined: 04 Jan 2003 Posts: 2815 Location: Mesa, AZ
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Posted: 3/25/2005, 11:34 am Post subject: Redneck Haiku |
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Courtesy of David Burge:
REMORSE
A painful sadness
Cain't fit big screen TV through
Double-wide's front door
OPTIONS
Unemployment's out.
Hey, maybe I can git on
Disability
BLAZE
Distant siren screams
Dumb-ass Verne's been mowing with
Gasoline again
A NEW MOON
Flashlights pierce darkness
No nightcrawlers to be found
Guess we'll gig some frogs
ALONE
Seeking solitude
Carl's ex-wife Tammy files fer
Restraining order
OFFERINGS
Tonight we hunger
Grandma sent grocery money
To Robert Tilton
DRAMA
Set the VCR
Dukes of Hazzard Marathon
Starts at 9 O'Clock
NO SIGNAL
White noise, buzzing static
Call Earl; the satellite dish
needs new descrambler
IMPOUNDED
Sixty-five dollars
And cyclone fence keeps me from
My El Camino
PRIDE
Grinning, he displays
The nine hundred beer cans that
Fill his pickup bed
ENIGMA
Rusty Paradox
Half Camaro, half Trans-Am
Yet it does not run
MYTHOLOGY
In ancient legend
Once lived singing fish much like
Big Mouth Billy Bass
CHOICES
Jax, Falstaff, Lone Star?
I ponder cooler specials
Ahh, Pearl $1.99
WINTER DANCE
Whirling, spinning, free
S-10 skates playful circles
On parking lot ice
IT HAPPENED AT STOP 'N' GO
Burning agony
Dale got his rattail stuck in
Hot weenie roller
SPARK OF GENIUS
Carl made backyard pool
From old pickup bedliner
Wisht I thought of that _________________ "Only small minds want always to be right."
- Louis XIV
"...haven't you lived long enough to know that two men may honestly differ about a question and both be right?"
- Abraham Lincoln |
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GTG Was lost but now am found
Joined: 30 Dec 2002 Posts: 2387 Location: Peoria, Arizona, originally from Rocket City, USA
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Posted: 3/25/2005, 2:19 pm Post subject: |
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Let me luk up them thar Heykoo rules agin and all shew yew sum redneck potry!
GTG _________________ Good things come to those who walk. |
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Daddee I once was a slug.
Joined: 04 Jan 2003 Posts: 2815 Location: Mesa, AZ
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Posted: 3/25/2005, 3:24 pm Post subject: |
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You have to be able to count ot 7 Todd.
I know you do real good up to 5, so we'll just relax the rules for you.
Of course, since rednecks pretty much make up words anyway, the whole sylable thing shouldn't be a problem.
Goat Boy's prior post in Haiku:
Luk up them thar rules
and all shew yew sum redneck
Heykoo potry, ya'll! _________________ "Only small minds want always to be right."
- Louis XIV
"...haven't you lived long enough to know that two men may honestly differ about a question and both be right?"
- Abraham Lincoln |
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CatValet Got Gear?
Joined: 04 Jan 2003 Posts: 735 Location: Scottsdale
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Posted: 3/26/2005, 12:26 am Post subject: |
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Now jest wait a minute. One o'them poked fun at Pearl Beer. Jeez, I love Pearl, Safeway used to have that, can't find it now. That and LSD (Lone Star Draft) are my fav's for hot summer suds days. |
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CatValet Got Gear?
Joined: 04 Jan 2003 Posts: 735 Location: Scottsdale
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Posted: 3/26/2005, 12:31 am Post subject: |
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Alabammy Haiku:
Gate's unlatched agin,
All the goats are gone
No date tonight |
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paintninaz
Joined: 06 Jan 2003 Posts: 3515
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Posted: 3/26/2005, 10:06 am Post subject: |
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CatValet wrote: |
Alabammy Haiku:
Gate's unlatched agin,
All the goats are gone
No date tonight |
Now that's classic!! _________________ ~Tracy
“Friends make the bad times good — and the good times unforgettable.” |
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GTG Was lost but now am found
Joined: 30 Dec 2002 Posts: 2387 Location: Peoria, Arizona, originally from Rocket City, USA
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Posted: 3/26/2005, 11:33 am Post subject: |
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CatValet wrote: |
Alabammy Haiku:
Gate's unlatched agin,
All the goats are gone
No date tonight |
Perfect Randy, this is just like what I was thinking of. You're first and best off the mark again.
GTG _________________ Good things come to those who walk. |
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Hikngrl Canyoneering is my 'Happy Place'
Joined: 27 May 2003 Posts: 5578 Location: Peoria, AZ
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Posted: 3/26/2005, 7:37 pm Post subject: |
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That's one for the books Randy! _________________ ~~~Diane~~~
I want to shine! |
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